3/27/2007

About History

Today's history class is so boring.
I have a book but I never use it. I have many time but I didn't to brainstrom to make a process myself. It's was just too boring. I reading another bookds in my history class - "Charollotte's web" , the author is Stuart Little, who has plenty imagination. Do not like history.

Our history class is just mention about the museum. It doesn't mention the real history.
Actually, I really don't like it

2 comments:

Litmus Paper said...

Several problems here. You need a comma after "book" in the 2nd sentence, since it's a compound sentence with 2 subject-verb combinations. Brainstorm and Charlotte's are both misspelled. The title of that book needs a capital W, the comma should be inside the quotes, and the author is not Stuart Little (that's a pretty famous movie title as well!). Also in that sentence your continuous verb is missing the BE verb "am". And also, you need "of" after "plenty". The next sentence has no subject, which makes it look like a 2nd person command.
Next sentence rewrite:
Our history teacher only tells us about museums, instead of teaching about real history.
The last sentence has no punctuation at the end.
You see what I'm talking about? I hope this is just due to carelessness instead of unawareness of English rules! If it is, though, better review your grammar books from before.
Your posts are not numerous enough; you should have 15 or more by now!
Chris

Litmus Paper said...

Also, beginning is misspelled in the most recent post, and there are two be verbs in a row in "It's was". Furthermore, since the history class was already finished when you wrote this post, you need to use the past tense to describe it: "Todays' history class WAS extremely boring." If you use SO, you need to finish the thought: "so boring that I fell asleep."
Grade for this batch of posts: 68
Chris