My Conclusion Paragraph:
It is true that oil and gas cannot supply all of the world's energy needs much longer. However, we cannot replace them with an energy source that is expensive and dangerous, from the time the fuels are taken out of the ground to even after the plant is running. Instead, we must develop cheaper and most importantly, safer types of energy to power our world.
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Hi Vincent. I notice that you seem to be quite behind in your blog entries. Remember the deadline for the entries is this coming Sunday the 10th. You may write two entries per day till then to try to catch up. Also you are not very careful about your grammar, such as "F", which is the form of the word. You mix past and present, and use adjectives instead of nouns.
Watch that this week. I'll look next Monday. No sense looking in detail now.
Chris
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