4/30/2007
Be Health
I like exercise. My aunt says Atlas Health Center (亞歷山大俱樂部) is a good place for exercise, and you'll love what it does for you! There's have air-conditioned rooms. And I can work out alone or with the help of one of our professional personal trainers. And if anyone like to exercise with friends, join an aerobics or swimming class or even try kickboxing! When we've finished, we can relax with a whirlpool bath. Come exercise with them at Atlas Health Center, and I believe I'll soon be feeling strong and looking good.
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Hi, I'm looking at your entries from 4/30 to 6/3. You have seven posts for 4/30, but as you know I cannot count all of them. This post's title is wrong--you need an adjective there: "Be healthy." Sentence 3 has two verbs: "There's have;" try "They have air-conditioned rooms there." You start a couple of sentences with And. There are other small things elsewhere, like a missing comma in the list that ends with kickboxing.
See you in other comments.
Chris
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